making love

making love
under a bright moon
sound of waterfall

or

making love
on the old porch
-rain sounds

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2 thoughts on “making love

  1. Oh cool, I like the two different versions. I have a bunch of those too, I’m thinking of writing a post talking about the process of revision and the differences between the versions.

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