winter night

winter night
two trains pass
falling in love

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3 thoughts on “winter night

  1. I love the ambiguity of this — my first thought was of two trains passing each other and falling in love, you know, like ships passing in the night. Then I thought obviously it must be lovers seeing the two trains pass. But both meanings seem to coexist in my mind, and it’s kind of like everything in the world is falling in love with everything else…
    or maybe that’s just me. 🙂

  2. wow! loved the fact that you have given so many angles to interpret in this haiku..
    powerful!

    I dropped in here from Jingle’s blog..Keep writing pls 🙂

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