traveling through falling snow

traveling through falling snow,
the same snow making her cheeks wet,

what rapture

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4 thoughts on “traveling through falling snow

  1. Two beautiful haiku (the boy’s haiku also). I had a moment of hesistant questioning until the last line, then I knew her cheeks were wet with smiles. Thank you for sharing these.

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