traveling through falling snow,
the same snow making her cheeks wet,
what rapture
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traveling through falling snow,
the same snow making her cheeks wet,
what rapture
in praise of small things 
Your poems are like lessons in loving.
Perhaps they ought to be required for all would be ‘lovers’.
That is one the best comments I have ever received. Thank You.
Merci. Quality wordcraft brings out the ‘best’.
Two beautiful haiku (the boy’s haiku also). I had a moment of hesistant questioning until the last line, then I knew her cheeks were wet with smiles. Thank you for sharing these.